Cryptographic id part is no good! Undercuts much of your piece I think.

Thanks for this writing on the means of subsistence/ creating a society where this would happen.

What is the point of the equation though? Is it to represent the issues that need to be addressed or because a preference to understand a problem through an equation? I think that could lend the reader to understand your solution as less coming from a textured self organizing process created by us- regular people.